Slyonsun Mykels « Thread Started on Jun 12, 2007, 1:01am »
Name: Slyonsun Libra Mykels
Nickname(s): Sly, Slyon, Sylee
Age: 15
Gender: Female
Kind of Person: Gifted
Power(s): Duplicacy, if Sly touches someone gifted, she duplicates their power and it becomes one of hers. The original owner of the power is not harmed and does not lose their power.
Appearance: Average hight, slender, long purplish-black hair, dark purple cat eyes, has black cat ears atop her head and a long, slender, black cat tail. She always wears dark purple and black, usually wears a slender, short dress or tight jeans and a tight, long tee-shirt, always wears high black socks, and sneakers.
Personality: She's usually shy, keeps to herself, doesn't usually get along with other since she hasn't interacted with many people....(explained why in History) She usually solves problems easily, she's nosy and will do anything to spy on people. Is good at hiding and evading unwanted company.
Family: Mother: Yalin, died when Sly was 7. Father: Zin, doesn't want Sly, he kicked her out when she was 10. Siblings: Two younger brothers, Alex and Marksun, died same night as their mother.
History: It was a dark, stormy night when her mother died, killed in a car accident, her two little brothers in the back seat of the car. Slyonsun, or Sly as she was usually known, was left to her father, Zin. He never really liked her. (He hated her because she was different, not human by his standards.) When she was left to him he shut her in her room for much of the three years he allowed her to stay with him. Being only seven when she lost her mother and two brothers, she found herself writing stories, fantasy tales about living in a castle with her mother and two brothers, without her father. By the time she was 9, she had filled more than twenty note books with her stories. She found comfort in her fairy tails. Well, one night, a month after her tenth birthday, she was reading through a few of her stories and her father burst into her room, drunk. "What the hell do you think you're doing?" He yelled at her as he ripped the note book out of her hands. "No! Don't! Give it back!" Sly screamed as her drunk father read through her story. "That's it!" He screamed, "You are out of this house!" She tried to complain but he shoved a handful of clothes into her book bag, and shoved the bag into her hands. He walked her down the steps into the dining room and shoved her through the side door, shattering the glass. "Don't ever come back!" He yelled, and with that he walked away. That was the last she saw of her father and her home. Since being kicked out onto the streets, Sly has lived in alley ways, hidden in the darkness, away from people, scared of what people might do to her if they saw the cat ears and tail.
Sample RP: Sly ran down the alley, trying to get away from the government agent, the alley dark and damp. The alley cats surrounded her as always. But something was different, one of the cats had one red eye and one blue eye. Sly stepped forward, hand out, reaching for the cat. As she touched it, it shape-shifted into a boy, a little older than herself. "Oh!" She gasped, "Well that was odd." The boy grabbed her shoulder and pushed her behind him and shape shifted into a large tiger. Don't worry, just stay down. She had read his thoughts. Half from fear of the boy and half from fear of the government agent, she slowly crawled under a box. She heard a struggle in the alley but didn't dare look. Then a moment of silence. She almost screamed when the box above her was thrown across the alley, but it was the boy again, with no sign of the agent. I told you it would be okay. "Thank you." Sly told the boy. He only nodded and ran down the alley and disappeared into the street.
Other characters on this site: None, so far.
Other: Sly has always been able to talk to cats, by reading their thoughts. Her cat ears and tail are not props, they are parts of her body.
Re: Slyonsun Mykels « Reply #1 on Jun 12, 2007, 8:27pm »
hey sis! I'd make it a little longer. Like put more on her personality, power, and appearance. But that's just me. *shrugs* Welcome to A Gifted Era sista dearest!
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Re: Slyonsun Mykels « Reply #3 on Jun 16, 2007, 10:41pm »
Looks good, but considering this is in the notebook I'm just going to comment on it, not judge it yet. Let me know when you are absolutely sure you want too post it for judging. Kiah has good suggestions, the sample RP needs more detail I'm lost when I'm reading it and the personality is okay, you could just add a bit.
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Re: Slyonsun Mykels « Reply #5 on Jun 21, 2007, 10:19pm »
Profile Status: Accepted
Notes: Good literacy considering it's your first time. Over time role playing will come to you well. You seem to have grasped the idea quickly. Welcome to a Gifted Era.
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